Reader Voices
“I am loving your ‘Breaking’ series! So hard to read at times (the writing is fantastic but the subjects are yikes), and the psychological aspects are frighteningly realistic with the complexity of [their] thoughts/actions/coping. I feel like I should earn my psych degree by the end lololol.”
— Moolishis (via AO3)
Breaking a Warlord
“I absolutely hate [Mulsae] more than any character I’ve ever read. Unfortunately I can’t stop reading this your writing has me hook line and sinker.”
”Your writing is phenomenal the fire scene was so unbelievable realistic and totally enthralling.”
— Val (via AO3)
“… I found this a few days ago and I’m OBSESSED! You are an incredible writer and I can’t wait for the next chapter.”
— freya23 (via AO3)
“It’s interesting reading this and then reading Part 2 because you seen the foundations here how [Mulsae] strips away everything from [Damion].”
— MidnightMarauders (via AO3)
“This story is fantastic, all I could dream of. The softness with which [Mulsae] approaches this, [Damion] breaking slowly, bit by bit. This is a true masterpiece, I love it all!”
”[Mulsae] is so scarily freakingly good at this.”
— ShipMistress (via AO3)
“This is amazing, I love how it’s humiliating but also they care for each other. Your a great writer please write more.”
— Alyx (via AO3)
Breaking Free
“I am in shock and in awe.”
— MidnightMarauders (via AO3)
“I literally could not stop crying during this entire chapter and the one before it. And I’m still keeping up with Breaking a Warlord as well. The story is very well thought out and I enjoy it. It’s good every now and then to read a story that can make you have a really good cry.”
”oh my God this one has taken me through such an emotional roller coaster. I’ve cried throughout all of these chapters like bawled my eyes out you are a great writer with this one and it’s definitely my favorite.”
— MyNeckMyBack (via AO3)
“Плакала, плакала, плакала и читала. Мне хочется его обнять и погладить по голове.”
I cried, cried, cried and read. I want to hug him and stroke his head.
— Telalula (via AO3)
“Three cheers to Viri, and you, for working through all that with such sensitivity.”
— Ali (via AO3)
“I am realllllly enjoying this evil/thoughtfulish [Mulsae] though. He really seems like a character that has so much potential for good but has let his darkness and power go unchecked (a very strong ‘absolute power corrupts absolute’ vibe). Awesome writing!!”
— Moolishis (via AO3)
Breaking the Breaker
“Ух, хочу обновление третьей части, где Райзанда мучают и мучают и мучают”
Ugh, I want an update on the third part, where [Mulsae] is tortured and tortured and tortured
”Ооооо, безумно ненавижу. и буду с удовольствием читать о его мучениях.”
Ooooh, I hate him madly. And I will read about his torment with pleasure.
— Telalula (via AO3)
“Your writing is amazing. I do love this because I hate [Mulsae] with a passion. He is getting exactly what he deserves.”
— Val (via AO3)
“Way to go on this amazing worldbuilding and creating this complicated story! Aaahh! So good!!!”
— 3sarahtop (via AO3)
Breaking Out
“I like your narration style and the way tension builds between the characters.”
— Abi (via AO3)
“… you got me to cry on an original character so yay?”
— Moolishis (via AO3)
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